Advice to Freshman
Hello, my dear freshmen, welcome to our school. Soon I will graduate from school. As a senior, I would like to give some pieces of advice. Hope they could help make your school life better.
First, try to do your best on everything. Though nobody can do everything perfectly, you still have to try hard, not only on your school work, but also on your extracurricular activities. Not until you try your best will you know your limit. The harder you work, the more you will learn.
Second, I would encourage you to join some clubs. In clubs, you will be faced with some problems which you had never encountered. In that case, no matter what you be faced, you will learn a lot. Take Barack Obama, the next president of the America, for instance. He went on to earn his law degree from Harvard in 1991. He joined the club of the Harvard Law Review and he became the first African-American president of the association. Even if you made some mistakes, they would become your unforgettable experience. And most of all, you make your network expanded.
Third, always try hard on learning how to manage stress. In high school, there will be much more setbacks than in junior high. Everybody will be confronted with depression and frustrations which are unavoidable. The only thing we can do is to solve them. I advise you to keep some good habits. They will release your heavy pressure. For example, you can cultivate a habit of reading. While you are reading, not only can you be relaxed but also gain knowledge.
In the end, do not be too worried about high school life, although everything is different from junior high. Don’t be shy when you have some problems, go to your teachers, and you will get help. Just follow the advice given above; I assure you of a wonderful high school time.
30206Bruce said,
November 14, 2008 at 7:56 am
The content is too short; the point of each paragraph can be much stronger.
It’s not fit to use “Dear freshmen” at the very beginning because it’s not a speech, it’s a composition.
Some few spelling mistakes, like “fellowfollow”.
It’s good to have well organized and orderliness.
30206Bruce said,
November 14, 2008 at 8:24 am
The content is too short; the point of each paragraph can be much stronger.
It’s not fit to use “Dear freshmen” at the very beginning because it’s not a speech, it’s a composition.
Some few spelling mistakes, like “fellowfollow”.
It’s good to have well organized and clearly structure.